BeautifulDoom

I felt the weight of him press me down on his bed, and I looked up at his flawless face. He had a wild look in his eyes, almost as ...

This is perfect in every way, it's beautiful.

Aw, thank you! :] I will have Chapter Two up by tomorrow.

God, look at him. Kayla thought as she stared out of her window at the boy who lived next door to her. He truly is a disgusting person. She watched ...

Thanks ballerina! I'll have chapter four up by tomorrow! :]

Hey, Ben! :] Here I am to review your story. I'm gonna do a really thorough review, because you've always done the same for me! xD By the way, I ...

Wow. This is really interesting. I think that it's wonderful because it's creepy. I think you did a really good job on this. It's interesting, suspensful, and fun to read. ...

BondGirl007- I definitely see what you're saying about slowing down character development. In the next few chapters, though, you get to know my main character a lot better. Her thoughts, ...

Thank you guys! :D And sure, snickerdooly. I'll PM you when it's done!

I loved this. Like Ben said, it was dun to read. My favorite was that last line. I really liked it because it was kind of explaining the whole poem ...

Chapter Four My mother and I were alone in a sea of strangers. Strangers they were, but somehow I considered them all my family. My kind. We all had two ...

Thanks, Antigone! I really appreciate your tips. I'll definitely consider them when writing Chapter Four :] Also, thank you Ballerina13! I liked your comment. Btw, I already posted Chapters Two ...

Hi, Ben! Thanks for the revies on Chapters One and Two, they totally made my day. But, the thing is, I recently posted Chapter Three and it's kinda lonely. Would ...

This poem is so cute! It flows perfectly. I like how it concentrates on both breakfast and the kids. Great job!

Dude, rate your stuff. There's kids on this site.