BeautifulDoom

Thanks guys! :D I edited what you suggested, and I really do feel that it makes the Prologue better written, so thank you so much for your help. :] I ...

Note: Leave feedback, because I'm not sure if I'm gonna continue this story :] Prologue - Isabelle's Point Of View Moans and cries of agony escaped my lips as despair ...

Moans and cries of agony escaped my lips as despair and anguish washed over me like an oncoming tidal wave. Misery hung in the air around me, but I was ...

Hi everyone! Okay, I'm not new here (actually I'm relatively old, so I feel idiotic asking this question.) How do you create a novel? Like the kind with the picture ...

I like this a lot. It's actually kind of deep. I only have a few nitpicks: 1. It's very well written, but also kind of vague. You should try giving ...

Whoah, that is really weird. My name is Erin! Freakkkky :D Thanks everyone!

Whoah, this is AWESOME. Update soon please! :D PM me when you do? Thanks!

Wow, I really love this. It's different, and really good. You have a lot of talent, and you're only twelve! I'm impressed. This was very well written, with perfect grammar. ...

I awoke an hour later, confused and still tired. I dragged myself unwillingly out of bed, hating how tired I was. It felt as if every muscle in my body ...

Thank you everyone! :D Wow, all your suggestions are so helpful, I don't know where to begin. :] Julie- Aw, thanks! Your post was very sweet. I'm about to write ...

It was unbelievable. That whole day images ran through my head of Patrick and that girl. I imagined all sorts of scenarios. Has he done this before? I also put ...

Thanks Zib! :] Ohhh, I forgot that I already wrote that she opened the door. Thanks for your feedback, I'm actually about to write Chapter Three right now. I'll message ...

Thank you! :] Oops, I actually just realized that I accidentally put "in" in front of "insane". My bad! But yeah, I'm having a lot of fun writing this story ...

Aww, thank you! Your feedback means a lot to me. And the reason she really hates Patrick is because he's exactly the type of mean, conceited asshole that she never ...

I love it! This is really well-written, but kind of depressing. I suggest you lighten it up a bit, but it's totally up to you. You have really good description, ...