BeKWithaK

No, it's not all going to be written in diary format, and not even from this character's view. This character is about 14 years old, and in any case in ...

Hi :D I'm sorry I haven't had a chance to reply to the comments but I haven't had access to a working, modern computer for three whole days :cry: And ...

I'm not sure how to post stories yet so I just copied and pasted it into the box. Please review! I really need to know espescially if the diary format ...

About the thing I put as the subject I think it's from Charlie and the Chocolate Factory--my little brother watches it all the time. :D Anway random stuffs about me: ...

It's good writing, I like it. And also in reply to what Lena said I thought the 'semi colon rule' was it could be used where either a comma or ...

Mmmm *thinking face* I like it. But it goes from first person to like, third person. At the start (most of) the statements are made in first person, then when ...