BeKWithaK

I liked your story but there's a few small grammatical errors that I can't be bothered to type. Just copy and paste it into Word or something so you can ...

Hi I'm Bek, and in my opinion you started it beautifully. :D Wow that was like too long for me to remember what happpend! But I did finish reading it, ...

Thank you Gryphon for reviewing my work :) After looking up what parantheses meant, I still don't get what it is, so can you please explain? I think Australians learn ...

Cool as! Where is the rest of this masterpiece; I want to read more! :D I once tried to write a scene like this...needless to say it did not work ...

Wow. You need to put SPACES into your sentences and look at your punctuation and spelling. I think you even spelled "fuck" wrong at one point, which seems to be ...

This is the first poem I've ever read that I actually liked. I don't read poetry, no offence intended, because a) I stutter a lot when I read so I ...

Hi! I'm Bek. I love this bit of writing, but is it going to be a a story or a short story or just a chapter, or what? "The man ...

Pretty please review this with a cherry on top! I'll be good, I promise :D 'Katie! Max!’ I bellowed, my voice sounding thin and feeble amongst the wind’s mighty...windiness, I ...

Wow, look how fired up this has got all of you! I read it all (well at least skimmed it) and I got confused. *Smiles* I'm growing up (right...) in ...

Hi, just want to say to anyone else who's going to read this, don't read the first longer entry, read the shorter one because there are a few subtle differences! ...

Alrighty, I'm sorry but I couldn't finish reading it for two reasons: 1. Put this in parts! I only read half of it, it's too long, for me anyway. 2. ...

Hi Wheadee (did I spell that correctly?) Twilight is alright, but it's just a fad. Don't copy it, please don't. No offence but I'm sick of Twilight and its many, ...

Hey there, I'm Bek. :D Just before I review, I have a question: is this one of those Twilight-based stories about vampires biting or werewolves or something? Okay, now that's ...

This the shortened version you said to make, Loveless. There was nowhere to seperate it so I just chose randomly. Part one: 'Katie! Max!’ I bellowed, my voice sounding thin ...

‘Kate! Max!’ I bellowed, my voice sounding thin and feeble amongst the wind’s mighty...windiness, I suppose. I thought I heard a faint reply, saw a shadow. I squinted, trying to ...