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Re: Somewhat Recent Charcoal Works
This was something I did for my Mom's 50th birthday. It's a portrait of my sister. This is a portrait I did of a little girl in my church for ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Scribbles from a cartoonist
Okay, so I've been waiting to look at your art, and I have to admit, I'm jealous! You have the fun type of artistic ability!! Me...I can't doodle or draw ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Scarlet Rain (excerpt)
Hello EloquentDragon! I'm so sorry to see that you were a smidge frustrated with the lack of reviews, so I have come to rescue you! It's the least I could ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Nap Interrupted
This is supposed to be funny, and is actually something that has happened to me before. :) I wasn't going for any particular poetic style but any reviews y'all might ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: PinkShearwater's girlfriend has arrived!
Hello LiquidFlame! Welcome to YWS! I'm an artist too, so I'll be looking forward to any artwork you post! There's not much more I can say after what has already ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: Fallen Angels: Aren's Tale Ch. 5
Well, here's the fifth chapter, hope y'all like it! Please review if the desire strikes you. I know for a fact I didn't do as great of a pre-editing job ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: The Voice In My Head
Hey Hawk! This poem reminded me of "Goblin Market" by Christina Rossetti, and if you haven't read that poem, I highly recommend it. :) Yours was a bit more accessible ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: The Photo
Hello camdapirate! I must say, I was not expecting the ending. That little picture girl is freaky. I'm not a fan of scary stories, but despite the rather bland and ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Zadar: Chapter Two
Hey emmylou! Here to review the wonderful chapter two of your delightful story Zadar! I could see some definite plot devolopment, and I liked the flashback that Aralyn has at ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: "Alright mate, it sounds like your from Landaaan"
*smiles* Y'all have no idea how happy this thread has made me. Not only do I have a list of new books to read (thanks to Rach!), but I was ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Zadar: Chaper One
Hey emmylou! I read this earlier and then I had to go vote, but I'm back to review! :) Impressions: I liked this. While I read, I got really excited ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Fluffy the Vampire Slayer Part 2
Hey Bubble! I'm here to give you my thoughts, as I promised. :) Okay, so I thought you did a great job of keeping up with the Buffy parody part. ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: White Eyes (part eight)
Howdy! I have to say, for not having read the previous chapters, I found this immensely entertaining! I was swept up in the pirate lingo and atmosphere of danger--yet also ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Nationality Headcount at YWS
I'm Southern American to be completely precise. A little Cherokee as well. Filipino: 1 Scottish: 1 English: 1 American: 2 Asian: 1 Finnish: 1 Canadian: 1 Indian: 1 South African: ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: Hunting for trouble. (revised)
Hello strangeshellie! Neat name! Anyway, down to the review! Impression/Plot: Interesting. I love werewolf/hunter/vampire/creepy mythical stories, so that's good. You don't give us a lot of background
Oct 27, 2010
