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Re: Supernatural Fan Fiction (so far.)
Ha! Oh my goodness! This sounds exactly like Sam and Dean! By the way, I LOVE Supernatural!! I want to marry Dean. Scratch that. I'm going to marry him. He ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Alas, the Teacher is Dead
Oh dear! (To quote the poem.) Well, I'm glad she didn't die. That would have been horrible. :) I don't know hardly anything about limericks, so I can't be a ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: hi
Hello keiththekiller! Welcome to YWS! I hope you find everything to your liking here! If you need any help with anything, don't hesitate to ask! We're all really friendly and ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Sympathy
Hello Crimsona! Didn't you just have this posted under another title? Haha, anyway, I thought this poem was really good. I'd meant to review it earlier, but I got hungry, ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Super Duper Ch. 4
Well, it's been a while since I've posted anything Super Duper. So here ya go. Chapter four. Read the Spoiler if you want some background. I know, I know, it's ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: It doesn't exist
Hello Laloifi! Welcome to YWS! So...I have this feeling that you're upset about something. (Yeah, I'm astute like that.) I'm happy to see that you managed to put some of ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)
Hey Skins! I thought this was funny. You've managed to capture the voices of delinquents very aptly. Almost too well in fact. :) Anyway, yes, there were a few phrases ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Twilight
I did the same thing once! I gave it to one of my sister's friends that loved Twilight. It was one of the first things I painted in acrylic. You ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: The War On Justice
Hello ED! As I read, I found myself inexplicably drawn to your side of the argument. A feat I'm sure was exactly as you desired. However, I also found a ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Captive: Chapter 1 (Re-done)
Hello jennyr! This is very interesting. I haven't read anything like this before. The idea of a man kidnapping a boy is really creepy...it's strange. But this is also a ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Fallen Angels: Aren's Tale Ch. 6
honest in your reviews. I've become so entrenched in how I think the story should be that I feel like I'm neglecting the actual progression of the MC as a ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Byari Chapter One
Hello RainStormZ! Happy Review Day! Impression: I loved this! The story started out really slow, but once I got into it and the fantasy elements I was hooked! It is ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Review Day November 2010 Check-In
I've done one! Hopefully I can do another one before I have to head back to campus!
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Ice Cold Fire: Chapter Two Pt. 2
Hello stargazer! First off, I would like to say, Happy Review Day! Impression: While I read, I was impressed with your use of dialogue. You did a good job of ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Teacup Rebel
Hey CandyVenom! This was great! It's like Gulliver's Travels and Thumbelina meets V for Vendetta. You certainly have an interesting concept here and you did a great job showing the ...
Nov 24, 2010
