Baywolf

Chapter 5: Breaking Me In A few days after I discovered my Powers, Mr. Smith came to me with a proposition. He had decided apparently that I was ready for ...

Darling Tanya, As usual, your prose delights my reading taste buds. This isn't the first time I've read this chapter, but I enjoyed it all the same. I can't believe ...

Hey Celtic! :) Sorry it's taken me so long to review this, but for some reason or other I kept getting distracted right when I was about to begin. Anyway, ...

Niece! I'm here to review! Firstly, is it just me, or do I remember there being another book titled "Here There Be Dragons"? Or maybe it was pirates...Oh well, I ...

Hello Celtic! I'm glad you reminded me, truth was, I read this a couple of days ago but had to go somewhere and forgot to review it when I got ...

Here's a little something of mine, Suz, that can use some TLC. Or Tough Loving Comments. I haven't thought about this story in a while, but I think I have ...

Hey there! Welcome back to YWS! It's really a very nice place once you get used to the bright lights and the whirling gears of fellow writers. :) The ones ...

Hello Teardrop! This is a nice little beginning to a story you have here. *pats story* I like the theme of "mystical beings" as a general rule, so I was ...

Hello MyMa! (I liked Rach's little nickname for you so I kept it!) I see you and John know each other. Interesting. Welcome to both of you, in any case, ...

Hey emmylou! I am here to review as I promised! I don't really have the time to give you a proper in depth review, but I plan on coming back ...

That was like being punched in the gut with awesome. Not my most eloquent intial response to a poem, but I think it is applicable and true all the same. ...

Chapter 7: Taste of Medicine The Herald and all she contained were still reeling from the attack and fight with the pirates. Somehow, the civilian passengers had discovered that the ...

Ahhh yes, hands. The bane of any artist's existence. Don't worry, Perse, we all feel the pain. I thought yours were cute, and good for having done them in class. ...

Hello Mazey! Oddly enough, I'm one of those strange readers who loves preludes! As for your's, I liked it. I didn't get the really "bad" vibe surrounding Knacks, but I ...

Ah, so here's another piece that just came to me and I had to write down. I've been kind of lazy in regards to working on my other stuff, so ...