Baywolf

Hey! Well, I want you to know I really enjoyed the use of imagery in this story. I like when an author uses their creative license to paint a picture ...

Aww! This sounds fun! Count me in as an addition to the audience :) I'd read something, but I seem to have lost my voice. Don't worry, I'm sure I'll ...

Forgive the length. I have a problem with verbosity, as is evidenced by my work. I won't even mention the fact that I broke the original second chapter in half ...

First off: I always love a good Robin Hood story. And this is definitely different since it is from the perspective of someone (a girl) from his band of merry ...

WOW. While the story was only a few paragraphs long, with minor dialogue, it has an impact. No one likes to entertain the idea of causing another's death, and guilt ...

This is beautiful. It's simple, yet covers a large scope with imagery. Definitely different from anything else I've read in a while. I never would have compared a person to ...

Thanks so much for the reviews! I appreciate each and every one! I'm in the process of revising what I've done so far (which if you're reading this, you've probably ...

Hey! Well, I just want to let you know up front, that I like the MC Whisper (great name, by the way). She's very strong, and sure of herself, which ...

Well, for starters, you were correct to assume your grammar wasn't exactly up to par :) but I have to say, you were also right in that it is an ...

Hmmm, I can see a little of myself in this poem. Although, as I read your words, I felt strangely like I was prizing my way into your secrets. It ...

Hi, To put it simply: I got chills. It reminded me slightly of River World crossed with Pleasantville . A very unique mixture to be sure, and I found myself ...

I've debated whether or not to just make the intro a part of the first chapter. I can't seem to decide. I really like it separated, but I've had some ...

I read your poem just as a summer storm raged outside my home. The sounds, the imagery the poem evoked echoed what I was experiencing, turning it into a moment ...