Baywolf

Hello mellaniimarii! You asked for reviews, so here I am. I'm Baywolf. Nice to meet you! :) Since this is basically an "outline" or sketch of a story, I can't ...

Hello, purplepen! Delighted to meet you! I'm Baywolf! I have to say, not being a poetry person myself, that I rather liked your poem. It is short and to the ...

These are a few of my haikus. I'm new to haikuland, but I find them fairly relaxing to write and read. I suppose that's why mine are all parts of ...

So I think I posted the almost done version of one of these in a blog post back over Christmas break, but I thought it was about time to share ...

RH! Yes, it's me. Your dearly absent aunt. I'm back for a short time today, and I happened to see this and had to comment. As always, your characters are ...

Well, here's the story carbonCore commissioned from the song Victory Rising by TriORE. Ashes to Ashes The television went out. The man pushed a button, but the screen still said ...

This spot is reserved for my review. I will come back when I have plenty of time to delve into the story. Plus, I might want to go back and ...

Hello my friend of the Kafka variety! I have to agree with earendil's assessment . She did a great job of pointing out the obvious pros and cons, and I ...

Hello Emmer! February is my birth month, so I was drawn to the title. That and it was really foggy outside this morning. :) So I felt like this poem ...

Hello Amanda! Welcome to YWS! This is very interesting. I love, love, love science fiction and the concept of DNA recombinants. This story kind of reminds me of Maximum Ride ...

Fingers type the words you see, Eyes unseen read words on screen, A message, a note, the reverberation Of a soul left dangling to be caught By hands across the ...

Well, here's the next chapter, and y'all have my dear Princess Hex ( carbonCore ) to thank. I'm not really sure where I'm going to take the story from here, ...

Hello GrenadeCatcher! This was very action-packed for such a small excerpt. That's impressive. You asked us to tear this apart, so...here I go. Don't worry, I'm very nice. :D I've ...

Hey Hawk! Haha! Love it! I don't have any nitpicks right now, but after I get back from class I can go over it again. (Not that I hope to ...

Hey Hex! After stumbling blindly into your story, I found my way out. I felt much like how Alice must have felt upon entering Wonderland. The whirling chemicals and sliding ...