Baywolf

Hey! Yet another great chapter! There isn't much for me to say other than a few nitpicks of grammar. You seem to be doing a great job of following a ...

I refuse to be weak. My bones are live wires Little tendons of mischance Connect them together In swirls of quicksand. The joints they are of iron Held by my ...

Hey Homeless! You've been such an ardent reviewer of mine, that I have come to review this delightful poem of yours! And so the cycle continues... To get on with ...

I liked this, yet for some odd reason, I haven't the foggiest clue as to why. Perhaps its the style, perhaps its the content, I don't know. My favorite lines ...

Hey dragons, I agree with Rosey...sorry, but reading that was almost painful. The only author I have seen get away with an entire paragraph consisting of one run-on sentence is ...

Me likey! I just want to put out there, that I think you deserve a bit more than a C for this. Ahem. TO elaborate, and draw conclusions based upon ...

Hello! I did as you asked, and I checked this chapter out! Two words: Love it! The MC is so stoic, yet relatable, that I find myself believing she almost ...

Ahhhh so this is a vampire book. I was beginning to wonder why he was so perfect and talking to the weird girl in school. My only problem with this ...

Read this if you like author sidenotes. If not, jump on to the story and wade on in to my literary world. Also, this is the edited version, special thanks ...

Basically, I'm not a poet, I'm a novelist. That's why it seems like if I feel like I need to write something poetic, it comes out like this: LONG. This ...

So first off: I really want to know what happened to Emily. I sort of figured that her mom died, but why were those kids making fun of her? That's ...

I remember when my mom ran over my hunting dog. It was horrible, I think I cried for weeks. Trooper had survived snake bite, constipation (he ate too many rats, ...

I really want to cry right now. I feel so bad about Jacob... I remember reviewing your first chapter, so when I saw this I had to see where you ...

Howdy TheMadHatter! Let's get straight to the good stuff eh? Grammar: There were a few nitpicks in this area, and I will list and highlight them in red for you ...

Hey kitrosemon13, To start off, I like to mention my general impression of the work. It was good. I liked the overall themes--love, angst, running to the one you love--and ...