Baywolf

Wow, I must really have meant that, because it just posted twice.

I give it a paws up! (Wow. That was so lame, yet I feel no shame.)

I give it a paws up! (Wow. That was so lame, yet I feel no shame.)

And Nate has done a fantastic job of illustrating the bold option, which I find particularly attractive for some odd reason. Also, I kind of disagree about the funny part, ...

That's not me screaming in the night. I'm asleep, filtering dreams from reality Trying to find a way back to who I am— Darkness cannot hide me from myself. But ...

Hello dear, I would have used your actual username, but it's rather long. Luxe, is it? Anyhow, I thought this was a nice sketch of the origin of a character. ...

I'm back! And I do remember reading and reviewing this story! (I also remember liking it!) Anyway, it's kinda late for me to do a proper long review, but I ...

Snoink, With that, we left for a restaurant. Best. Line. Ever. That's all I have to say. I haven't caught back up yet, so of course this whole chapter has ...

Hello rememberme! This is a nice little poem. It's simple, but the imagery conveyed is enough to carry the message across. The odd composition adds another element to the reading ...

Hello Matthews! Nice to meetcha! You've practically summed up my existence in this poem. Nicely done. I've been drinking coffee since I was a wee tot. My grandmother used to ...

Hello Jagged! This is a beautiful use of imagery. I love the last two lines about the doe's legs scrambling across the white pebbles. Often people concentrate mostly on the ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! Okay, now that the pleasantries are over, we can settle down to the reviewing portion of this...review. Haha! Actually, I don't really have too much to ...

Hello! This is such a cute story! I loved it! I found a few grammatical errors, mostly where you repeated a word. Actually, in both instances you repeated his twice. ...

Hello charcoalspacewolfman! I like your username. Very...long and random. That kind of combination is always a plus in my book. Anyway, I see that this is for a contest type ...

Hello medieval! I came as soon as I read the summons. Anyway, I see that this chapter has already been critiqued quite well, so I won't hit any of your ...