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Re: Starshine- Chapter One
Oh, did I? XD Thanks. :)
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Hey Everyone~ I'm BGF.
Thank you guys for all the warm welcomes! Theotherone- thank you! Music is great. I am trying my hand at writing lyrics, actually. :) Ranger Hawk- I ride at a ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: What Animal?
A raven, definitely. They're big, beautiful, glossy black, and their wingspans are quite large.
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Hey Everyone~ I'm BGF.
Hey guys, So I suppose I'm a bit late to post here, as I joined late Friday night, but I figured it would still be nice to tell you all ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Starshine- Chapter One
Thanks for the review. I'll edit the points you brought up and keep the ones you suggested in mind.
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Starshine- Chapter One
Thank you for your review! Chapter Two is currently in the works.
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
Hey, if you'd be up to reviewing my piece of fanfiction I'd really appreciate it. Since you're probably not familiar with my topic, disregard the last line. Brutal honesty would ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Curse of a Pirate PART 1
This is a great piece! Your dialogue is very smooth and flows well, and it's easy to sense the feeling in the story itself. The only thing that is missing, ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Starshine- Chapter One
Reviews appreciated! I'd love to improve in any way I am able.
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Watchful Part two (chp.6 and 7)
Lovely work. Great descriptions, and the dialogue between everyone is really good too- however, would have liked some more details about the cave. It's a bit vague and rather hard ...
Jun 25, 2011
