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I have to agree with uhhm, Amelia with the whole black soul thing, very cliche and also very unsuited for this piece. But overall i think it was well done, ...

She was griping her mothers hand tightly I think you meant to spell it as 'gripping'. The imagery is very well done, and it's a very nice, lucid piece of ...

That's a short story, go for your life. If you like, i can return the favour?

I loved this actually, one of the more original stories posted. Was the character and the clow actually crying? i don't know if crying is too believable, but maybe tone ...

So i guess the question we're really asing is: If we post out work on this website, is that considered as published or can we still submit them to be ...

The Deathly Hallows!

As a guy, i always thought those modelling shows that make you feel inadequate are fun. Some of the girls are soooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful. Which is good, and the photo's are ...

I think that maybe you should get at this like you woul when reading a play. So set out the scenes in which everything takes place to be a bit ...

The title pretty much says all i am asking. I want to know what peoples goals are for writing, i.e as a profession, leisure, to get published, to get published ...

Are you going for an interesting name which isn't yours, or a name with complete anonymity. If you're going for the latter just choose 'Jane Citizen' or 'J. Citizen' if ...

I carry a little ntebook on me throughout the day, so if i get a mind rush i'll plot it down if i'm on the train, or if i'm walking ...

I thought it was very good but the most obvious thing that strucks me, and the reason i opened it really was because your title misspelt 'Heaven'. I thought it ...

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I may be intruding here, but this site is not associated with YWS is it? So if i get this right, the idea is just to try and finish a ...

I think you're right in saying that a story narrated by a girl is not often a 'males' first choice. Not to say that guys don't read them, but there ...