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“Here, take this, it’ll put the rosy back in your cheeks.” He handed the young man an oblong pill, and looked him up and down. He was pale, shaking and ...

Sorry if my small review is pointless Never. I thank you for taking the time to read and review. Eventually most or all of these stories and people will tie ...

i actually really like the last line of the poem. it is my favorite part. I think maybe if you put more plant imagry in it could definately work. :lol: ...

His only shot; man versus vulture.

There was fire in the heavens. Excellent opening sentence. Can't really say anything more about it because it speaks volumes for itself, I would say. Excuse me while I nitpick ...

Ok, changes made: him and his family had been left to claw at the open windows He and his family had been left to claw at the open windows It ...

:D :lol: :D You can't imagine the relief I feel in seeing that you got this one. I was under the suspicion that nobody would dig it. More to come ...

*** Not a Test *** Conrad staggered through the dark, rain slicked lawns, cursing the closed and locked fences that he’d have no chance of hopping in his current state. ...

I like it, yet it reminds me more of fantasy than sci-fi. My only advice on continuing this would be to really flesh out the visuals in it. This has ...

In contrast to the complaint on the lack of savagery and chaos one would expect from a plain crash, I rather enjoyed the serenity of the images in this. also, ...

Ok, here's me with short hair finally. As you can tell, I'm a goofy dastard.

It's called [male] chauvinism. Right on Icaruss. And thanks for specifying the [male]. Too many people are chauvinistic about the word chauvinism. :lol:

It costs more to put someone to death then to keep them in jail for the rest of their life. How can this even be true? I could kill someone ...

I say, hunt the handicapped!

For some reason this particular debate reminds me of Lord of the Flies.