BarrettBenedict

The butterflies died and lay in the snow. Yay. But I felt like something new. That feeling of abandon that I love to give to you. I know I'm lousy ...

The mirror reflects more mirrors. You put them together wrong and show enough people and they will say "Hey, yeah, I can swing that." I don't get the relationship of ...

It'll do. I think everyone else caught the spelling mistakes and so forth. The teenage years are full of confusion and brooding. I wrote many such like this. Who cares ...

I like it. I give it an 8/10. It's artful, and well colored. It suggests a kind of beauty, but it's not lame beauty, because hawks aren't lame.

Johnny Got His Gun by Dalton Trumbo. It's an oldy but a goody, dark political story about a Soldier that gets all of his extremities blown off and is stuck ...

I was delighted as poop to find this. This is just a naturally great horror story. I enjoyed it so much I forgot to think of things to say during ...

This was pretty fun to read. I like the fact that it's not broken up into any stanzas. It's like one frenetic train of thought, and in my head I ...

Hi. You seem interesting enough. Your name might get you in trouble though. They're a bit puritan around here. And: You don't sound like an idiot. And: Write something. -Barrett

Well that's actually pretty cool. I didn't know the mormon faith held anything like that in it. Also interesting that I just started reading The Varieties of Scientific Experience by ...

When all the stars were gone, then there would be no more light, and they would reign forever. I would take out that middle part, and just have it: When ...

It reminds me of what a scientist would dream, perhaps lacking the poetic finesse in waking life. It's a beautiful viewpoint; admiring the complexities of design in the universe. I ...

This is well done because it makes me want a cigarette too. But maybe not one as personal as this. I'd hate to get attached to something and give it ...

Ha, ha. Well put, sir.

It's awesome if you're a linguist. He mixes a lot of different langauges together in the same sentences, constantly making quips and puns that I'm sure he was the only ...

Hey, that was pretty good. First thing I've read of yours and I am impressed. I think the teacher should get a kick out of this. It certainly held my ...