BarrettBenedict

I’ve noticed that time seems to slow as you fall to your death. I’ve been falling for quite some time now, remembering with painful detail every regret in my life ...

Here's me being overly exuberant about hugging my friend Heidi. Hey, don't knock it until you try it.

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All God's chillun deserve epic mullets :lol:

Ok Let me redo that one then. You probably look like a welshwoman . Six foot eight, one hundred pounds, no hair or eyebrows. I'm still going for the oversized ...

8/10 You can't deny a truism.

Yes, Awake, that was me roughly 2 years ago. :)

This was just terrible. I was expecting to read the words of a conceited man, and instead come to fine that I've been had by an introspective satirist. Not funny. ...

You probably look like a welshman. A vaudeville mustache with the edges turned upward, and a monocle. I'll bet you wear oversized zoot suits, like Tom from Tom and Jerry. ...

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Wow this was quite excellent. There are always other strings Who offer up their red and white and blue and yellow and green Mantras to the wind In that order ...

So here is me and my dad from way back when. And yes, we both have epic mullets.

Hey this works pretty well for a short piece. It probably wouldn't have worked with a different POV, so good choice there. Some damn fine descriptions in this: His heart ...

Awesome words here my friend. A very cool rhythm structure here as well. I like the title and- Brook of iniquity where love flows. Awesome last line.