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Re: Bleet
Bleet is the sound a sheep makes.
Aug 12, 2006 -
Re: Bleet
it seems this little girl with ribbons in her hair and shrapnel in her face are all part of God's plan it's good to know that in the billions of ...
Aug 10, 2006 -
Re: Ode to Someone's Mother
That last line is just wholly inappropriate and hilarious, and that is it's main function in this poem.
Aug 1, 2006 -
Re: Ode to Someone's Mother
caught in the undertow of a thought carried away on the broken back of an undisciplined rhythm passing through subatomic slipstreams and defective dream catchers laughing waves of an alien ...
Jul 31, 2006 -
Re: Forget the Alamo
I'll post this here since it falls somehwere in between prose and poetry and I've not the mind to decide which to label it. Subtle reactionary triggers blow high-speed razor ...
Jul 29, 2006 -
Re: Existence is Nothing More than a Persistent Earwig
(… a compilation of habitually destructive habits lie writhing thrashing in the waste of what was once mistaken as human life, a starving memory alone on tear slick city motor ...
May 18, 2006 -
Re: Incandescent
I can hear you scratching away at the back of my skull where the protective membranes vibrate burrowing tunnels through the grey matter weakening the structure of my ego setting ...
May 18, 2006 -
Re: No title comes to mind
There is no beginning These hands are by chance This special place in space in time Infinitesimally abysmal We are but manifestations of God Atoning for eons passed These familiar ...
May 7, 2006 -
Re: a treatise on fertility in goats
Thank you Poor_Imp, for nailing my intentions right on the head.
May 2, 2006 -
Re: Dark Night
Wow, that is possibly the most helpful comment I have ever seen. I have nothing to add, aside from good start.
Apr 25, 2006 -
Re: a treatise on fertility in goats
Countdown to the apocalypse when the news hits bowls release worldwide and dogs bark at the end of barbed wire chains pitiless shuffling cloth beasts wander dust storms grinning flesh ...
Apr 25, 2006 -
Re: Sensory Defecation
if I could turn my eyes around and view the gelatinous fillings of my skull would it make me less of a man? common sense dictates that if the blood ...
Apr 16, 2006 -
Re: Caricature of a Deity
Thank you all for your positive comments and constructive criticisms. This being my first post I decided to start out strong, with my favorite story. Now all I have to ...
Apr 10, 2006 -
Re: Song for You: a haiku
Hmmm. I'm a little disappointed that nobody who commented on this poem actually understood it's meaning, which is odd because everyone I've showed it too before this understood it. Also ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: Song for You: a haiku
Well that hardly seems like constructive commentary. I like haiku form poetry simply because it forces you to express a lot in very few words, the end result being (if ...
Apr 2, 2006
