BarrettBenedict

Hey guys, thanks for all your help, especially that website sureal, but alas, my original question was less about publishing in general, and more about publishing a specific story. I'd ...

Well, the beginning can be changed. It's a shame you didn't read through more of the story, and give me a fuller critique, because even if I improved upon the ...

I've got this story I want to get published, yet there are a few questions I have about the whole process. For one I want to know if this particular ...

It is meant to be "God, you're beautiful".

We picked him up at an old run down watering hole, passed out on a bench in the back of the joint. Dreaming of discarded pictures of loved ones and ...

Wow, thanks Fand. I agree with just about every change you've suggested here, except for the removal of the word magically towards the end. The reason I can't remove that ...

I knew an amazing storyteller once; he used to talk in great waves, distorting space and time, and weaving majestic tales through the immeasurable tapestry of the infinite. Occasionally, during ...

None of it makes sense anymore. When cons start outweighing pros, and hope becomes a screaming infant tied to a stick and beaten repeatedly against the concrete sidewalk, and every ...

Wow, this is simply amazing.

I think TimJim gave you just about everything you need. You have a good sense for words, you just need to work on how you utilize them. Overall this was ...

If you count to ten Then count to three You’re thirteen steps ahead of me But if you count infinity I’m closer than you’ll ever be

Thank you backgroundbob. Your comments are definitely flattering seeing as how you yourself are an exceptional writer and one who's opinions I can trust.

As the man studied the crimson Rorschach test left on his bathroom wall, he decided that it reminded him of a butterfly in a frog's mouth, or maybe of cat ...

Hey there, thanks for all your comments. I would like to say to writingluver that the use of comfy chair in this poem was quite intentional. It's there to signify ...

and so I sit here in my comfy chair the smell of censored reality on my breath who says I can't laugh away the pain? just that one little piece ...