BarrettBenedict

It's a nice little snapshot. The activating incident comes on a little too late for the abrupt ending, though. It seems to be about 3/5 setting it up, and then ...

My car is haunted by the spirit of a dragged man. He’s tied to the bumper by a rope of ectoplasm. He screams at stop lights and you can only ...

First off, thanks for your review, Olli. Second off: oy vey! You're actually asking me to reduce the quality of my work by dumbing it down? I might suggest TV ...

Why thank you. It's interesting that you mention my vocabulary, as there is at least one completely made up word in here. See if you can spot it.

It happened during a philosophy lecture. We were three hours in, and I was fading. Time crawled like a sick cat. My cognizance began to recede. Noises and peripheral movements ...

Part Two A week later Cutting Out the Middle Man sold for thirty six hundred, and I found myself paying Punnett another visit. The man who answered the door this ...

This was well written and I can't wait to read the rest of it. There's always room for awesome fantasy ideas to tie into music, it's such a subconscious thing, ...

Hey thanks for the good advice. You're totally right, I've neglected the momentum of the beginning a bit. I was wondering how I might make it more whiz-bang. I'll have ...

Part One The unfortunate mark of true artistic genius, I think, is that many only achieve worldwide fame and recognition after they have died. Another indicator is madness, utter and ...

Hey, awesome, I'm glad I found this. That's a tough choice to make, climbing that ladder, even if words have led you no where. Just make sure that the ladder ...

Hey, well thanks for the spelling advice. It's too bad this wasn't your cup of tea. At least you got your review.

Chumpar and Dulcifer had made it. Two kindred souls well met in their final life time, they had reached the cusp at the same time. Several life times of loving ...

Yeah, I identified very much with this. I've actually been there, at the point where there is no question when you've lost someone. One moment they are your friend and ...

Ah, what a great poem. I'm such a literal person that poetry does little else for me but leave impressions, so I'm not going to review this the "right" way, ...

Ah, thank you. You're right about that sentence. This was an older writing and I had to go through it and make it more palatable as far as over-wording goes. ...