BarrettBenedict

Hot shit, man. The ending is perfect. It's short and brutal, memories manifest themselves so there's no need for exposition, it's the perfect little package. Needs some editing though, nothing ...

This is me.

Lazy Sunday, the day of some people's Lord, and I was up to my usual Machiavellian pursuits. I was midway through a fingernail job, you know, duct tape, uncomfortable wooden ...

Haha, ok, despite my highly refined cultural sensibilities this one gave me a healthy chuckle. If I were to make a parody of something like this it would just end ...

Hey folks, I rewrote this one in the last edit. Director's cut ending and I changed Timothy's name because the new name is infinitely cooler.

Hey thanks for your review. As for who Timothy is and why she's talking to him, he's her pastor and she's calling him because she's lost her faith in God. ...

I was sitting in the waiting room of the New Horizon retirement community, thumbing the yellowing pages of my favorite book. Having been through the process enough times in the ...

Hey, I was laying in bed last night thinking about what you said about the main character being a woman. I think that's a spot on observation, and I've decided ...

On the third day a warm wind blew through the hole in the roof of the attic, carrying with it the smell of sulfur and charred meat. Cohen was perturbed ...

So this is another of those creative writing class exercises. The rules were to write a dialogue between two people, with one of them trying to convince the other to ...

Better than I can do with poetry. I like the line about the sad new moon, it seems to me that the author is identifying with the solitariness of the ...

Hey thank you both for your comments. I wrote this for an exercise for my creative writing class. The class has been forcing me to write like a sane person, ...

I remember it was my son’s wedding. It took place at a little church on the outskirts of a little town that was probably full of people that played with ...

My goal here is to create a stepping stone for your own imagination, nothing more.

Hey, I really like your style. You have a very solid voice, one that seems to be made for entertainment. I couldn't help but notice you are a science geek, ...