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I know I am late but please don't kill me. I know I should be killed, burnt, drowned or in other words I should be Rasputin'd but still.... Nyhooo it's ...

A wonderful read. You expressed yourself perfectly and I could feel that sense of longing as well. It's very moving to be really honest because everyone of us or most ...

Brilliant. It's simple, neat and doesn't complicate things. Most writers would needlessly go into details which needn't be there, which in turn makes it look like a couple of words ...

This poem's inspiration came from not one but two sources. First was, as most of you may have guessed by now from the name of this poem, Metallica's song - ...

This poem was rather hastily written and I was distracted while I was writing it, henceforth it may not be as good as my previous works. Note : I sometimes ...

It is by all means an interesting poem. You successfully conjured up a very vivid picture for the readers. Using the lyrics from a rap was a bold and risky ...

Interesting. Though I have one or two things to point out To describe it any other way would be as vain and Easy as pinning words to clouds. The " ...

QUICK REPLY= I loved it, beautiful and intense images, you spelt "losing" as "loosing" once so check that, favourite line was definitely "But the vision shattered, its splinters stabbed his ...

Hey Kitty Would you kindly critique this poem (if you get the time that is) Thanks :D P.s: (Just in case) If you're feeling super generous and want to go ...

Note : I sometimes post poems as notes on my facebook account under the alias "Pseudonymous Rex" . I just wanted to make it clear so that if someone stumbles ...

wow this is very moving but I didn't get what it was about. I'm very confused on were he is and who he is and what's happening. I know poetry ...

Interesting, very interesting indeed. I had to go over it multiple times to grasp all that was going on there but I still wasn't able to understand all. A few ...

Note : I sometimes post poems as notes on my facebook account under the alias "Pseudonymous Rex" . I just wanted to make it clear so that if someone stumbles ...

Nice! Brilliantly written. The narration was particularly good. The whole slightly informal "I-do-not-belong-here" perspective you took with the narration really did a lot for it. But some similar nam

:smt039 Hi, Baron. Welcome to YWS! :elephant: I'm Searria, but you can call me "Sea." We have a wide variety of forums for all different works. If you want to ...