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It was funny tho the way it was formatted made it quite confusing. and overwhelming. but very funny tho. especially as the cabbie was ignorant of matt's insults. his simplicity ...

COOL!!!!!!!!! the story is really amusing! the part about the toast was fun. as well as the life/death part. really good! why dun u turn this into a real production! ...

Very Entertaining! I loved it! especially Billy. hes lyk a stabilising quantity in the story. the part about the dad and the daughter was entertaining too! Quite funny. tho more ...

Very Good. The story was interesting. especially the part where Norman taunts him so much that Herbert would choose suicide.