Bard

Hello, this is only a quick reply and since i dont have too much time right now because i should be sleeping but ur script caught my eye im going ...

Thankyou all for ypur wonderful comments...the rest of this pieace is all formed snd has been for a while however like all good writing, Nephthys, as you prolly know; even ...

Here is a group i invented for this play: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- THE CHARACTERS: EDGAR: A spirit. The essence of Edgar Allan Poe. He is

Two things. First: Blocking and direction. Hard to understand with the **** things around them italicized is you best bet, also tooooooo muuuuuch. Let the dialog speak for its self ...

BOY: Well, [shrugs] I thought maybe things have been a little hard. This is one of many examples in the piece where, as a writer, you should let the actor ...

Hey, i'm glad you liked it. Yes the format from paper to this site was a little rough and i may go through and try to fix it. But thanks ...

--------------------------------- Experimental work i created last year. Heavily political. Here it is enjoy!!! ~Bard --------------------------------- !!!!!!WARNING RATED – R!!!!!!!! AUFDA; a fable

Very good job!, Nice character developement, imagery, plot devices etc, etc. This is my favorite piece of yours I have read, very nicely done! But, even though the story was ...

Very nice! Overall I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Its rythm and simplicity are what, in my opinion, make it such a nice poem. Your word choice is very good too. ...

A very good beginning, full of good imagery and realistic dialogue, however quite a few errors too. Needs a bit of work in the editing stage; here are a few ...

I have never known a time which fear has enveloped so much of my senses, childhood or naught…the fear of the unknown is a fear darker than death. It is ...

THE HISTORY OF AROI The First Age Before the beginning of time and universe, before there was life and living breathing organisms, before there even was matter, there was Atar ...

-------------------------------------------- This is just an expression of feeling...not poetry, not a monologue, a script, or a story... ...just pure emotion. Enjoy. ---------------------------------

Interesting idea. Very..."Monty Pythonesque" religious satire is alot of fun. Now I will have to read the first part. Keep writing. Though I would have to agree that a little ...

A very interesting idea. I liked it a lot, though I would hve to agree with "Jiggity" some of it was a little cliched, though still thought provoking. My suggestion ...