BamickAZ

You're very comical and you have an energy in your writing voice that is to be envied, but I am more stoical and I know it and since that is ...

Hi Areida07, I would appreciate your comments on "Sylvin," but its really long, so take your time. But, what I really wanted to say was, your story really is a ...

"I like it, I like it!" I really like this poem, but I have some suggestions that you might want to try out. Hope they help... 1st stanza => Beautiful, ...

Sonicroyale (Tarver), Thanks so much for the offer to edit my story further. I would really appreciate that. I'll e-mail it to you later, I am not on my personal ...

The Twelve Days of Christmas Prologue I curled up my toes and wished the day would never end. In the first line you say, “I curled up my toes and ...