BadNarrator

aww, you guys said it before I could. but yea, it all depends on the context. the way it is used can portray a character as either hardened by life ...

first thing you should do is give the woman a name. a lot of developing writers seem oddly opposed to naming their characters for some reason (trying to achieve "the ...

I think the problem you're having has more to do with knowing your reader than it does to do with the writing itself. if your story features graphic violence send ...

6/10 there is specificity in the first half of the sentence and it leads the way into the rest of the story. but there's no action so as a reader ...

an emotionless character isn't a character at all, it's a prop. anger and love? too grandiose and universally vague to be compelling. and hopelessness. hopelessness? it's difficult enough to care ...

Koreopolis has fallen...let us pray.

I would say don't do it. Omniscient voice is extremely difficult to do and it takes a lot of skill and practice to pull off. I went to a fiction ...