BadNarrator

So first of all I want you to ignore all the complaints in the posts above me about people whining about the length of the story. Nothing annoys me more ...

(Author's note: This is a revised version of a story I posted on here before under a different account name so those of you who think it looks awfully familiar, ...

Is the boy Jonah or someone else? THat was sort of confusing, didn't really make much sense. I'd suggestest maybe slowing down, adding more detail and emotion To, be honest, ...

A test: The boy knew he had to keep it out of sight or else something bad might happen. Jonah had found it wandering through woods behind the white people’s ...

I've got mixed feelings about the narrative mode you've chosen for the story. On the one hand I pretty much hate all 2nd person narrators, but on the other it ...

I enjoyed this story. I generally don't care for the lyrical writing style but I think you pulled it off very well. In all there are very few things I ...

lol thanks guys. And if you have any questions about bokonism feel free to ask. I'm pretty much just making up stuff as I go along.

I was gone, now I'm back. I doubt many people will remember me or my cynical writing style. Oh well.

Hello there. I'm a writer, like you, and a Bokonist. Bokonism is a religion based entirely on shameless lies made up by our untrustworthy prophet, Bokonon. If you cannot understand ...