Baconator

Awesome work! The only grammatical issue I found was the word "or" spelled "ot" in the big paragraph. Or maybe you meant for it to be that way. I like ...

Applying for college sounds like an extremely aggravating process. I wish you luck! Anyways, it is a great protrayal of how complicated it school is in modern times. Like how ...

Epic poem! It was like a suspenseful action thriller poem (which I have never seen the like of before). Keep doing awesome epic poetry :) I liked how the ending ...

Cool story! I like how the theme puts into a literal pespective that time seems to get away from us and its hard to hold onto memories. The only grammatical ...

Hilarious! Its funny how you don't get the title until the end. Lame jokes always make everything better too. “What happened to the Mad Scientist who fell into a vat ...

Very intresting and revealing on life. Its always been a good question to ponder about whether or not the people in asylums are the insane ones. But then again, this ...

Oh yes, a poem about writers block; the best! Despite claiming to have no imagery you have tons of it: drumming these keys hammering my brain Also its only a ...

Makes you think about how much times have changed and sort of a coming-of-age story. The flowers can symbolize the happy memories, as flowers are respectably happy plants. The basment ...

Fluffy dogs gambling Old men rambling Europeans cheese sampling Cats flea fighting Scared engineers nail biting Rushed doctors writing Hushed whispers sighing Millions of flies dying Chunky guys flyin

Its a very big transition and adds the shock effect at the stanza that states right out into the open, Until he died. . It makes the poem more intresting ...

Epic psychological thriller-ish story! The only grammatical error I immediately noticed was in the second paragraph at left to him.Before . This should be changed to left to him. Before ...

The way hope is portrayed in the fourth stanza, "Hope is dripping out of out minds, like solemn rain drops after a storm." is really descriptive of how as time ...

Amazing voice and dialect! Coming from a fellow mashed potato lover this is some great work. The end is extremely humorous, "The horrible truth, hidden in yer mushy love. The ...