Baconator

Amazing story! Kind of used the Tin Man thing from the Wizard of Oz but expanded on it and gave it much deeper meaning. In the second full paragraph, I ...

It was a great story but... it kind of implied that it was a good thing to go towards the car and get killed. Sure, it was a happier ending ...

I loved your use of dark humor for this! How the main character would sometimes switch from third person to first person, realizing that he was his own makes you ...

Great use of dark humor! I'm very interested on how you got some of the ideas for this story, such as a dermatologist, the cheating husband, and especially the baloons! ...

Humorous and explains the situation of most bedrooms. I like the poem's descriptiveness and voice. It has a very good rhyme scheme and the rhythm is cool. boring to the ...

I like how you use the image you see of the ocean in your mind as an escape from hard times in reality. The fourth stanza, I keep staring at ...

Just curious, what is the poem talking about? It seems to sound like it's inffering nature, as in the first stanza, Who breaks but remains unbroken? Who bore first life ...

It makes you think about how the worst feeling we can have is feeling nothing. Also I think about how it can feel like nobody listens to anything we say ...

I love how it relates to everyday life. There always someone talking and acting like a hot-shot or trying to be funny. Sometimes that person is ourselves. You get so ...

I love the details and the way you drew these. I haven't read the story but I will. You can tell a lot about the characters just from the pictures. ...

Amazing! I like how it shows that there is hope for all of the great things there are in life. It explains all of the things that all living things ...

1 There once was a kid named Ted who went to a horrid camp. It rained and rained and rained. While it rained, he would sit in his cabin and ...

Thanks for all the reviews! I will fix the North Korean sneeze champions part. The ending isn't supposed to rhyme though. It doesn't rhyme because it is supposed to kind ...

Coming from someone starting high school, this is a very comforting poem. I like how the theme kind of revolves around how as scary and frustrating as high school may ...

Great work! :) It makes me think of peaceful summer nights. I like how the poem is very descriptive and full of imagery. The only grammatical issue I could find ...