Baboon

Please review :) I feel good about this idea :) Chapter I The sound of the torrential rain drowned everything on the beach. Nature’s own unconquerable white noise, it condemned ...

I like this piece, and I usually hate anything and everything set in WWII, but I do seriously like this. I'm gonna avoid grammar because that's not my strong point, ...

LOVE THIS LOVE the way the victim's cries are made almost immaterial by not giving them "s. LOVE the suspense and atmosphere. LOVE IT :D Seriously good. Not much else ...

Thanks a lot guys :) I've got about six ideas on the go at the moment, so hopefully you'll see some of them up here if I can take your ...

I think that the only key to a good villain is that they have the power to completely screw things up for the MC, and it is this power that ...

OK, so essentially my problem is that I'm more interested in how my stories end than how they....i don't know how to articulate this...i'm more interested in how my stories ...

Thankyou :) hahah yes very helpful, and as for the lack of much conflict well this is just the first part of the first chapter and i like to keep ...

Thanks to both of you, i'm writing the second part now :D. And thankyou soooo much Stella for the link to the dialogue punctuation thing i get so confused about ...

I like it :D ok there's been tons of reviews before me so i'm guessing if there were any grammar errors then they'd have been mentioned, so that's my excuse ...

Hey please review this, i know it doesn't reveal a lot since its only the first part of a chapter, but i'm going to start writing the second part as ...

Hey this is good, i read the prologue as well but didnt feel like reviewing ok :P Soooooo, well firstly even though i don't really like this style/genre of writing ...

Ok this is the first review i've written in a while, but i'll try to make it good :D Hmmm...well I'm no grammar expert and i have neither the attention ...

Thanks for th review :D Baboon

Please review anyone, I'd really appreciate some more feedback before i start writing the next part ;) :P

Hey again pretty crazy, thanks for the review of my latest thing :) Kk so I see basically everything about this has been reviewed, so ill just say that i ...