BFG

Please try to submit two reviews for every piece of yours that you submit; see the rules. Then I'd be happy to review this. Thanks! And welcome to YWS! :D ...

Thanks, Areida! :D Yeah, I think that pretty much describes its intentions. -Sophie

Hey LOSO! Welcome to YWS! :D Some tips before I begin my review: --> Try to get your review count up a bit. At a minimum you should have a ...

Wow, I'd almost forgotten about this poem! Thanks for critiquing, Sunny and quiteloud! :D As for the "darkness rising" part, I was actually picturing the wings rising in the dark, ...

Thanks, Rodhead! :D I agree, punctuation is goooooood. People say you can write poetry without it, but there are very few famously good poems that don't have even erratic punctuation. ...

Hi! This wasn't terrible, for starters. In fact, it would even be 'pretty good' if I hadn't read essentially the same poem every day for the last two weeks. And ...

***if anyone can find the allusions, do point them out please =) Again *I don't get the title.* TSun *If this is your pen name, it doesn't need to be ...

Thank you, live.laugh.love! :D Thank you, Moonlit Mystery! :D I think every poet longs to be understood, so I'm glad that could happen here (with the help of some good ...

BFG wrote: No problem! Don't worry about it, we all do stuff like that. I've been around here for a while now and I still don't know what I'm doing ...

Thanks, Madel! :D It's nice to have things reaffirmed. Glad you liked it! -BFG

No problem! Don't worry about it, we all do stuff like that. I've been around here for a while now and I still don't know what I'm doing much of ...

I like this, for all its cliches. That's its main problem though--it's waaay too cliche for most people to give it a second chance. The words flow beautifully, the imagery ...

Hey, TSun! Maybe this is forbidden or unethical, but I'm sure a mod will correct me if it is... You're supposed to review at least two works before you post ...

Thanks, KNS012! :D Grammar's actually really important to me, so I'm glad it flows smoothly. Again, thanks for reviewing! -BFG

Thanks Sunny! :D I agree, that should be a new stanza. Unfortunately, I have no idea how to make that work with the meter... it's such an awkward location... but ...