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I really liked this story. It didn't go on about the fact that the narrator could see the ghost and no one else could, just a few details but not ...

A pool of invisible fire glowing embers of soft sleepy fur curly and fuzzy and wrinkled and small, oh so small. A tail that doesn't quite touch a wet button ...

I like it. I especially enjoy the lines It's like touching butter, So soft and smooth... that was original, and a good, accesible metaphor. I also liked the idea of ...

I loved the first stanza, but I think you should take that and start a whole new poem with it. It doesn't really connect to the rest of the poem, ...

It's got a light feel to it, which is nice, and i like the image. beware of cliches, however - try to come up with new words, not just the ...

wowww... this is great. i love the imagery... you tell a story without telling it, just by giving details. i really like that.

It's good that you feel passionate about something, and have the urge to express it, but remember that a little research also never hurt (tigers eat Sambar deer, wild pigs, ...

I love this poem, especially the first and last stanzas, and adding the question marks to the original lines makes it all the more plaintive. I like the theme of ...

Poetry, fiction (very short stories and attempts at longer ones, though I don't usually get past the first few pages before I'm off with some other idea) and observations of ...

Hello! I'm Sophie. I'm 16. My interests include any kind of dance, particularly ballet and traditional folkdancing, reading, writing, taking walks (I live way out in the middle of nowhere), ...