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This was good, great if it was your first poem. I liked the way you shied away from cliches without making it too obvious that that was what you were ...

I liked the topic and I thought some of the phrases and images you used to describe it were good, but it was too wordy and didn't develop enough. Trying ...

Wow. I think this is your best yet. It's long, but it develops, and so subtly, and delicately... it carries none of the show-off, or lusty, or love-deprived, or attention-seeking, ...

I'm a milk addict... literally... I recently realized that 910 of my daily calories come from milk (I drink about 7 cups of 2% a day) and have been working ...

I actually liked the big words, though I thought some of them maybe didn't quite fit. That kind of gave it a quality of "you don't know what's going on ...

Hehe :D Sorry to stir up envy, but we had a snow day on V-Day and today. Yep. Definitely the height of my winter. And then we have school tomorrow, ...

My only real complaint about this poem is that it doesn't mean anything to me. The topic is cliche and overused, and for all that, it doesn't even have a ...

Oooh, I see... now that I read it through with that in mind, it makes a lot of sense. I really like it - especially the ending, and the bit ...

I wasn't sure what the crimson light could be, and I thought it was just not going to make sense, but then when I read the roses part I liked ...

Hehe :D Yes, I seem to have gotten that element of poetry right at any rate.

I like it. I especially like the finality of the last lines of both stanzas. I like the images, too - particularly the image of someone dancing with a ball ...

Hmm. I'm not crazy about the message. And I really didn't like the second-to-last stanza, with all the questions in it. But the beginning was good, though I'm not sure ...

Limericks really have to be very witty, and this one is just nonsensical. For a nonsense poem it's fine, but for anything else it just sounds silly. It would be ...

I like it, though the ending had me confused. Would you mind explaining it, or would that ruin the whole purpose of the poem?

I thought it got better as it went along. I loved the description of her hair feeling like hay, and the sister's hair that smelled like bubble-gum shampoo. I really ...