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I like the topic. It seemed very professionally presented, too, with no real obvious typos or spelling/grammar don'ts. It seemed a little long, though. Not as in too long a ...

I like it. A lot. Though I don't think for a moment that I know what it's about. I love the line "I am pink as a frankfurt," and also ...

Never read any of your previous work, so won't bother with the poll. Don't really like to put my responses into such rigid categories, either - that's what the comments ...

I like it ok, but it didn't hit me over the head, you know? Didn't strike me down. It needs more power behind it, needs to take the lead... right ...

I thought it was too weighed down with adjectives - the only uninhibited action was the dialogue. The other thing I didn't like was the use of too-strong words, particularly ...

um... is this a poem or prose? cause... you might wanna check where you put it again...

I like it, and I could definitely imagine a voice reading it. Imagining a voice reading it led me to get a better sense of the words, the way they ...

I liked it up til the fourth to last line, One word. A single word that can cause So much pain… Asthma. That whole "one word"/"single word" thing is very ...

It wasn't bad, but I felt it could use more imagery. It got better as it went along, though... the first stanza was like all theory and abstract words strung ...

It's ok, but I want to hear about all the other stuff, the stuff in between. If you've led such an action-filled, fearful, emotional life so far, it must have ...

This is really good, one of the best things I've read on this site. I love the poingant sadness. It's so powerfully detailed, and the reality blends nicely with the ...

Oh, yes, I agree completely with putting a colon there. That would be better. Although, perhaps a semicolon would work, too...? Hmm. You've made me think. The second line is ...

When I was little my dad was working on his disertation, so I was too, of course. I would scribble on sheet after sheet of scrap paper, telling everyone that ...

I loved Kite Runner, though the end didn't live up to my expectations. Right now... A Tale of Two Cities, and Bastard Out of Carolina. Enjoying both so far.

Probably the some stuff my dad's written... just because he's my dad... and Capture the Flag . I loved that book, but its portrayal of a period, and the generation ...