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Haha cool name amazingpinkpotatoes! Welcome! :D

And ebb away -- dictated by tide, by moon

I'm Little John beating Robin Hood at the river crossing! Then I'm sailing to South America on a small boat with a tall mast. Reaching the shore, I hike over ...

I get tired of the girl being beautiful but somehow not knowing she's beautiful, or becoming beautiful late on, Cinderella or Ugly Duckling style.

Wow. It's been four years since I was on this site, but five or six (or seven? could it be seven?) since I frequented it regularly. I need some creative ...

Kylan, I just read your story to see if it makes sense. It does, and it's really incredible. Nice work. :)

Yay! It just arrived...! :D

Still waiting for mine... and I'm in New York! :(

Another filler to go along with "like" is "y'know?" or "y'know what I mean?" Probably those are used everywhere, but Americans definitely use them a ton.

Super cool! There's also a "book machine" now at the Harvard Sq. Bookstore in Cambridge, Mass. that prints a book while you watch...any book you can find on googlebooks the ...

Wow, this is really powerful. I love the "plastic into gold" part, and the second-to-last bit and while I am trying to find myself in this world, you have already ...

Hey there! One thing I liked about this poem was your use of capitalization. You've got it dead on with the "Bus," "Sun" and "Sunshine", it seems. I agree with ...

Hey there, screamandshout! So... there was a lot I liked about this poem. My favorite part was They can't see the beauty, I even have my doubts. I liked that ...

I agree with Kyllorac. The last part was really powerful, particularly the last stanza, but almost the entire rest of the poem was so stuffed with abstract words or concepts ...

Thanks guys! Yeah, I think you're both right, the last stanza doesn't really fit. Maybe it belongs in a different poem but not here. Navita, I agree with you about ...