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Re: The girl
Before I criticize just in case I want to say sorry because I don't quite parts of the story, I only say what's on my mind. This story really made ...
May 6, 2009 -
Re: All She Has Is Falling
Very Nice lyrics, I can see a good rhythm. Just a few things (I'm not going to use quotes just so you know.) Out of my opinion Mumma seems kind ...
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Re: Let Me Be Free
The song kind of reminded me of 'Close Every Door To Me' from Joseph and the Amazing Technicolour Dreamcoat by Andrew Lloyd Webber. You should have a listen to it ...
May 6, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Be Free
Yeah JUST TO MAKE IT CLEAR I PUT CHORUS AND BRIDGE FOR BAND PERPOSES* ONLY NOT NECESSARILY TO TELL YOU GUYS
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Be Free
This song was okay. But I think you used the word cell to much, so in time it pretty much got boring. I think you also don't have to write ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Be Free
Don't you see me caged up in this jail so much to live for so young and so frail trying to protect me from the outside world but all you ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: The Weight of Suicide
This is amazing! The poem is very deep and it looks like you put a lot of effort and soul into this piece. I honestly couldn't find anything that seemed ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Do these even exist?
Any of Scott Westerfeld's books, not just the Uglies trilogy but all of them. Here is a short list of books that I have recently read and would recommend to ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Flame Dancer. Prologue. (Edited)
Two hooded figures appeared in a deserted street. There was no light to speak of, and it was tricky to make out any discerning figures. A gruff command was barked ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: The Tree of Terror!
and she was sent to an island in the middle of the pacific ocean with 49 other kids. There were fifty kids with me. Ok I read it and it ...
May 3, 2009
