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Re: Demigods: Camp *Still open*
Name: Ophelia Rain Age: 14 Parents: Hades and Rebecca Rain(Veterinarian who works in the Colorado Veterinary teaching hospital) Appearance: She is tallish, lanky, and dark skinned with black hair(a fe
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Desperately Seeking... YOU!
If you have time, could you review this for me please?
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: What makes someone annoying?
People who consider themselves better then everybody else and vocalize this opinion are extremely annoying. That's about all I can think of right now.
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: My Side of The Story (Monologue. Edited.)
Congratulations on being able to perform it for your drama class!This has come a long way since the first two drafts, and I really like this version. Okay, now on ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: Some of my pictures
Hello, I really enjoyed most of these images. However, there were some things that I thought could be better. 1. This is an extremely beautiful picture, however it somewhat off(I ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Waiting..
This piece was good, but there are still a few things I noticed that could be better. First of all, the ideas contained within the sentences are a little bit ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Close Your Eyes
I really enjoyed this, and could see the emotion behind it. But of course, this wouldn't be a helpful review at all if I didn't have some point to it. ...
Oct 3, 2010 -
Re: Understudy
Everything first was to be for her if you could just watch princess of this supposedly impartial kingdom worshiped, nearly when contrasted with her forgotten counterpart i knew you’d understand ...
Oct 3, 2010 -
Re: When You Leave.
I think this piece was good(it carried a simplistic, sad atmosphere, which is awesome), but could be better with some revision. "The rain began to fall. I rushed outside to ...
Oct 3, 2010
