Azarel

This is awesome. *I* for one, enjoyed and was impressed by your high vocabulary. Loved the bits of repetition, and the ending was really touching. Your metaphors and descriptions are ...

Silence That’s what you evoke in me You’re strong and kind Yet I hide from you Gracious You never seem to judge me Yet I’m invisible as well Or am ...

It tears my soul To see you like this Battered by our enemies Wounded In my defense Breathing faintly Bleeding, bruised, torn Pale as death Come back to me Open ...

Life’s crying in the corner She’s quite upset today So many now have lost Her And thrown Her all away Life’s drowning in Her sorrow Abandoned and misused She tries ...

You perfectly captured the pain and bitterness of this kind of experience. It helps the reader understand what the speaker’s feeling and thinking. Depressing, but very well done. Made me ...

I like this a lot, mostly because it confuses me. It feels like you could be talking about a dozen different things, which gives my imagination freedom in interpreting. It’s ...

Thanks, guys, for your feedback. This is my first time posting any of my work on any site, so I’m still a little uneasy about opening my writing up for ...

Time is flying with wings outstretched, It soars over the egg over the seed over the cradle Its shadow falls across the child watching as he grows It sweeps across ...