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Audra Weaver

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: In Life and Death: Chapter 1

    Beautiful! Absolutely fantastic!

    May 3, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Chapter 1: Part One

    Yay! Very nice! It's just you need to put a space between the eleventh and twelfth (sp?) paragraphs...Other than that...WONDERFUL!!!

    May 3, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: In Life and Death: Prologue

    Very nice except for a couple of (as usual :P) mistakes. I like this one more!

    Apr 30, 2007


To be a master of metaphor is the greatest thing by far. It is the one thing that cannot be learnt from others, and it is also a sign of genius.
— Aristotle, Poetics