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Re: In Life and Death: Chapter 1
Beautiful! Absolutely fantastic!
Thu May 03, 2007 4:23 pm -
Re: Chapter 1: Part One
Yay! Very nice! It's just you need to put a space between the eleventh and twelfth (sp?) paragraphs...Other than that...WONDERFUL!!!
Thu May 03, 2007 4:12 pm -
Re: In Life and Death: Prologue
Very nice except for a couple of (as usual :P) mistakes. I like this one more!
Mon Apr 30, 2007 3:00 pm