AyumiGosu17

Meagan inhaled deeply, releasing it in a huff. "I didn't need that. I had it under control!" she barked, waving her hand exasperatedly. He snorted, scoffing. "Sure, you did." "What's ...

Thanks, Snoink. Yeah, we've since discovered that she's very affectionate and tender. I'll show more into it as I continue writing. It's been almost a week, so I've had a ...

Lol, yeah... I am, habitually, a little verbose at times. Thank you for the tips. I'm working on a full edit right now; I'll update it here shortly.

Lol, yeah, you're right about the dinosaur part. But that's the fun in it! :p I do see your point, so I'll see what I can do. I'll probably end ...

Note to readers: The events that occur in this story are, in their entirety, relatively true. I am changing names of people, not animals, to save identities, and there is ...

It seemed very childish to me, which that may be your point. But I grew bored with it within the first six paragraphs; it strays too much for the topic. ...

An interesting viewpoint on a belly dancer. Being one myself, I never thought of it that way before. Your title certainly snared my attention, as soon as I saw it. ...

Lumi, I find that comment derogatory and unnecessary. Yes, he did freak out a little bit, but Dynamo is still my friend. Perhaps the primary reason he posted this is ...

I understand, Dynamo, that this is indeed a little alarming. It's a good thing you pointed this out, so that we would know something more about it. But, going off ...

Hmm. More interesting, definitely. I didn't see that many errors this time, so you're getting better with proofing it before you post. Good job!

Go back to the previous page, where all the links to different works are. There's a little link box that says "New Topic" above the list of works. Click on ...

*Tip: When you post a new chapter, put it in a new discussion so people will actually see it.

... “Father!” Méave screamed, racing into the building with Shiloh on her heels. “Father, where are you!” She ran through the wide foyer, going against the flow of fleeing, screaming ...

... “Father!” Méave screamed, racing into the building with Shiloh on her heels. “Father, where are you!” She ran through the wide foyer, going against the flow of fleeing, screaming ...

Really short for a chapter. Then again, I prefer long ones myself. Just a couple of notes: I glanced up from my staring of the last of the two suns ...