AyumiGosu17

Thanks a bunch, everyone! And to answer your question Teague, yes, the apostrophes are substituting for accents, because I couldn't figure out how to type the accented letters themselves. And ...

Wow. I've never gotten such a response from so many people before! It feels GREAT!! :smt003 Thanks a bunch, everyone!

***I'm ready, but I have no idea what to post. Last night's football game was the worst one I believe I have ever and will ever have!***

Wow. I love it when it rhymes; I cannot rhyme, and I envy you for that. But the main things I love about this are 1) how it flows. It's ...

When I see your downcast eyes, When I hear your mournful sighs, When I see you break and cry, When I hear you wonder why, When I feel afraid for ...

Wow. Deja v'u... I've felt like this once. This time last year, I felt the same way, and I feel that your poem demonstrates and defines that feeling of being ...

Very fitting, indeed. I like Richard Wilbur's stuff, anyway. :D

Absolutely beautiful. It's almost like a prayer, so sincere and true. If it is one, I know He answered it for you! The words you use are so captivating; I ...

*The last line, written in Spanish, translates to "You are my heart."* . Kiss me softly. Let the water fall. Forget the world around us; Let it just be us. ...

It seems almost like a rap, but hey, that's poetry for you. Your style is your own; if anyone tells you otherwise, ignore them. No two poets will ever be ...

I like it. Very smooth and to the point. It's almost like I can picture it. Just one problem, in line 13, you wrote "message have"...either make "message" plural or ...

Hey Aqua. Ayumi here. Just to make you feel better, you're not the only one with problems with songs. I'm the opposite of you; I can write the music, but ...

In line twelve...you wrote "misgortunes" instead of "misfortunes". But that's all I saw wrong with it. I absolutely love your tone, descriptions, and use of metaphors. It really captures the ...

Unlike most people, I actually prefer free verse, especially when it's on such a complicated topic: love. I like the introduction. It makes me want to keep reading, to find ...

***That sounds good to me. I would post, but I'm wiped out. Just got home from the first football game of the season. Won 28-7!***