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Re: Unlove Letters ♥
Hmm. I never would have thought of them as three separate poems. They are so closely related, so closely entwined, it makes better sense to keep it as one long ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Winged Crossing- Prologue
Winged Crossing Prologue Shining brightly, the full moon lit the night sky. It created a faint yellow glow, while the stars created tiny dots of radiance around it. Below the ...
Oct 2, 2009 -
Re: Zekkou - Chapter One
Hmm...rip it apart, huh? You shouldn't have said that , not to an explicator-in-training! :lol: :wink: But on a more serious note, I like this. Completely. I like the style, ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry
I know what you're saying. Bad emo versus good emo, basically. I think the difference between bad emo and good emo is the proper use of similies and metaphors. If ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Rhyme time
A note to readers, I apologize in advance if I seem irate and offend anybody. I don't know why people assume freeverse and standard rhyming are the only rhyme schemes ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Playing Clichés
NICE! If you had written this to me, I would jump on you in a heartbeat, showing you gratitude. :lol: :wink: It's very clear and straightforward, but it's not pushy ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: Mom
It's adorable! I love it! There's only one place that seems a bit out of rhythm: The world to me was harmlessand filled with childlike joy. When life was all ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: The Way You Love Me
Thanks, everyone!
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: The Wyverns
Kale watched the scene unfold in the street from the safety of a shadowed alleyway. He could tell they were Wyverns, like him, but prefered to be left out of ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: The Wyverns
Name: Kaleb Sanders (preferably known as Kale) Age: 21 Gender: male Appearance: As a human, he is tall - about 6'2 - and looks like As a wyvern, he stands ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Never
Thank you so much for the reviews! And to answer your question, vox nihili, no, I did not get my inspiration from Emily Dickens' poem; I didn't even know there ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Never
I have never... touched a cloud, avoided deceit, seen God's face, or raised a family. _ I have never... known perfect peace, seen my father well, not regretted mistakes, or ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: The Way You Love Me
It's in the way you make me smile. It's in the way you call my name. Being forlorn is now impossible. _ It's in the way you watch over me. ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: That Fair Evening
A fair evening... her frozen winds lick my bare limbs and slay all fires; . A midnight sky... shining above, crying “freedom,” tells a story; . Open meadows... waist-high grasses ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: VG Rumble II
Kai groaned, shifting when sunlight hit him in the face. He turned his face away from the source, only to regain his senses. He could tell he was sitting up, ...
Sep 10, 2009
