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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Unlove Letters ♥

    Hmm. I never would have thought of them as three separate poems. They are so closely related, so closely entwined, it makes better sense to keep it as one long ...

    Oct 22, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Winged Crossing- Prologue

    Winged Crossing Prologue Shining brightly, the full moon lit the night sky. It created a faint yellow glow, while the stars created tiny dots of radiance around it. Below the ...

    Oct 2, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Zekkou - Chapter One

    Hmm...rip it apart, huh? You shouldn't have said that , not to an explicator-in-training! :lol: :wink: But on a more serious note, I like this. Completely. I like the style, ...

    Sep 23, 2009
  • Poetry Discussion Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry

    I know what you're saying. Bad emo versus good emo, basically. I think the difference between bad emo and good emo is the proper use of similies and metaphors. If ...

    Sep 23, 2009
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Rhyme time

    A note to readers, I apologize in advance if I seem irate and offend anybody. I don't know why people assume freeverse and standard rhyming are the only rhyme schemes ...

    Sep 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Playing Clichés

    NICE! If you had written this to me, I would jump on you in a heartbeat, showing you gratitude. :lol: :wink: It's very clear and straightforward, but it's not pushy ...

    Sep 22, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Mom

    It's adorable! I love it! There's only one place that seems a bit out of rhythm: The world to me was harmlessand filled with childlike joy. When life was all ...

    Sep 22, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Way You Love Me

    Thanks, everyone!

    Sep 21, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Wyverns

    Kale watched the scene unfold in the street from the safety of a shadowed alleyway. He could tell they were Wyverns, like him, but prefered to be left out of ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Wyverns

    Name: Kaleb Sanders (preferably known as Kale) Age: 21 Gender: male Appearance: As a human, he is tall - about 6'2 - and looks like As a wyvern, he stands ...

    Sep 17, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Never

    Thank you so much for the reviews! And to answer your question, vox nihili, no, I did not get my inspiration from Emily Dickens' poem; I didn't even know there ...

    Sep 17, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Never

    I have never... touched a cloud, avoided deceit, seen God's face, or raised a family. _ I have never... known perfect peace, seen my father well, not regretted mistakes, or ...

    Sep 16, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Way You Love Me

    It's in the way you make me smile. It's in the way you call my name. Being forlorn is now impossible. _ It's in the way you watch over me. ...

    Sep 16, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: That Fair Evening

    A fair evening... her frozen winds lick my bare limbs and slay all fires; . A midnight sky... shining above, crying “freedom,” tells a story; . Open meadows... waist-high grasses ...

    Sep 13, 2009
  • Archive Re: VG Rumble II

    Kai groaned, shifting when sunlight hit him in the face. He turned his face away from the source, only to regain his senses. He could tell he was sitting up, ...

    Sep 10, 2009


Oh, Brightlord Tumul! How unexpected it is to see you standing there! I didn't mean to insult your stupidity. Really, it's quite spectacular and worthy of much praise.
— Wit (The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson)