AyumiGosu17

***Yay! About time!***

***If I make mistakes, let me know. I am not in my right mind at this particular moment, and am merely writing what I feel as I feel it. As ...

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I feel I can only handle one character. Is that okay with you? Name: Amelia Age: 18 Gender: female Likes: animals, art, music, anything outdoors, anything sports Dislikes: immaturity in ...

Aww...this is so sweet! I like this! But a pointer: "Week" in line 9 should be "weak". Other than that, VERY nice! :D

***This is an essay for my AP Government class, to be turned in tomorrow for a grade and a possible chance at a scholarship. I just wanted a few reviews, ...

And I'm writing two more stories with Dynamo. Key of Power is the story of a young man, Adrian, being teleported 1000 years into the future, where humans are extinct. ...

Very nice. The detail is fantastic! I love how you shaded him. Keep it up! This is fabulous!

Hmm. I like it. And I get the metaphor: you're not discussing a butterfly, but a girl with a wounded spirit. Am I right? But here's a little help for ...

Yeah, uh, sorry, but I couldn't finish reading this. Halfway through, I was...shutting down on it. Here are my main problems with it. Note: my comments are in blue, and ...

Ooh. I like it. Very classic. Very smooth. It sounds almost like one of those 1700s era poems. Fabulous! (Yeah, sorry...we're studying poetry in my English class right now, from ...

:lol: You're welcome. :lol:

sweet! I know this feeling all too well. I felt that way before getting involved with boyfriend, and now we've been together for a year and two months. So, maybe ...

Well, other than that, I liked it very much. Straight to the point, no digressing with wordiness necessary. :lol: :wink: Way to go. Keep writing.

Este es yo. Soy fuerte; soy valiente. Yo rompo; yo sangro. Yo duelo; yo lloro. Puedo aguantar contra los corrientes. Este es yo. No. No es correcto. Uh, try this ...