AyumiGosu17

***Hmm. That sounds good. But about halfway to Shippuden (like, a year and a half after this post), I want to do my little idea with Ayumi and Itachi. I'll ...

"Who's Kenta?" Kaito asked as the two began to walk toward the school. "Only the meanest, angriest, and toughest girl in the school!" Masaru whined, trying to walk a little ...

Ayumi chewed her lip, staring into the noodles before her. Hmm...that IS a predicament... But Emi needed help; what she could offer her, she wasn't quite sure, but she could ...

Oh. :shock: Oops... So...you were taking a picture of it just to show us, or to practice your photography techniques? That would change our critiques then... Not to sound hateful, ...

Damn, girl, it's been a while since I saw you last. Where the hell've you been these past few months? We miss seeing you at school! :lol: Anyway - rant ...

I agree, but to an extent. This does look pre-set, but you could change that. Perhaps try a different angle, zoom in a little and focus on just part of ...

***Yeah...um...why are you using the "[quote]" application? And you probably need to put another space between paragraphs and sentences; it would help me read your posts easier...*** Tera walked home,

Hmm. Interesting picture. I'm not sure exactly what it's supposed to be or depict, which makes it a little hard to critique completely. But, all in all, I do like ...

Not bad for your first post in the art forum. Not bad at all. Just a few pointers though (some commending, some critisizing): I like your color scheme; the blues ...

:lol: Hey, whatever works, try it. Experiment!

Ayumi raced through the trees, swift and stealthy as a tiger. The three Genin were so obvious, stomping their way about the woods and yelling at the tops of the ...

You guys are awesome. You make me feel more accomplished and special than my own friends and family! Thanks a bunch!! Ok, Bubblegum. I have a few things that help ...

Wow, you are very talented to draw and paint..and color these pieces! There must have been a lot of patience in doing these artworks. I really love the first one! ...

Masaru groaned as he staggered to his feet, slapping dirt and gravel off his clothes with bleeding palms. He apparently hadn't noticed the blood on his skin, for he gave ...

Ayumi reached her apartment with no other trouble; she entered the five room suite and locked the door, striding over to her radio. She turned it on and turned the ...