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Audra Weaver

  • Archive Re: Kunoichi (Ayumi and Emi)

    ***Neither am I. :lol: *** Ayumi looked up; the sky was turning into a rainbow of color as the sun began to set. They were still on the same obstacle ...

    Mar 1, 2010
  • Archive Re: Kunoichi (Ayumi and Emi)

    Ayumi led them to the first obstacle: the high wall. She would forego the simpler ones that could be passed solo. Establishing a strong sense of teamwork was her first ...

    Mar 1, 2010
  • Archive Re: Kunoichi (Ayumi and Emi)

    Ayumi watched them make themselves comfortable in the sitting area. Apparently, and not unexpectedly, they had failed to notice her. Don't forget; they are only Genins. She shifted, getting onto ...

    Mar 1, 2010
  • Archive Re: Kunoichi (Ayumi and Emi)

    Ayumi read through the files, taking her time. First was a pretty kunoichi. Haruki Tensho was the Genin Iruka had told her about, encouraging patience and compassion with. She had ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: First Tiger Drawing

    Wow! I like it! It looks a bit of a cross between anime and realism - anime, in that it has very rough lines, a cartoonish expression, and that interesting ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Archive Re: Kunoichi (Ayumi and Emi)

    ***You're training them at night? :? Sorry if I don't post much today; we're doing some forest work.*** Ayumi watched Emi leave, then smiled at Iruka. "Thanks for this, bro." ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Archive Re: Kunoichi (Ayumi and Emi)

    Ayumi didn't hear her. She was too busy studying and memorizing each sheet. Oh, fun, was all she could think as she put the last page back in the file. ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Charcoal Disaster :)

    Hey, don't feel bad about charcoals. I use them myself, and I know: they are a total pain in the ass . But some tips! Rather than make the same ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Mystical stare

    I like this. A lot. It drew my attention, and held it. It left me on the edge of my seat, begging for more. And the ending leaves me curious. ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Archive Re: Kunoichi (Ayumi and Emi)

    Ayumi stretched, lounging on a treelimb high above the Academy's courtyard. As usual, she had been up at dawn and out by six-thirty. She was dressed in her Jounin uniform, ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: deleted

    Hmm. An interesting take on a Bible story. But it's controversial for me. I like your descriptive, narrative style. I could picture the entire scene as though I were standing ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Archive Re: Kunoichi (Ayumi and Emi)

    Ayumi laughed. She just hoped she didn't end up with whiny brats. At least give her someone with a bit of spunk and adventure in them! But that shouldn't matter; ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: More Artwork

    Thanks, guys - or should I say girls? :lol: And Pacific...that's not the first dog I've done; that was just the first one I posted on this thread... :lol:

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Hands

    This is a cute picture. I like it. It has a bit of a cartoonish appeal, which is good for any kind of age group and setting. It also has ...

    Feb 26, 2010
  • Archive Re: Kunoichi (Ayumi and Emi)

    Ayumi didn't realize that she had crossed her fingers behind her back. She waited, almost anxious, for the council to come to a decision. Say yes. Please say yes. The ...

    Feb 26, 2010


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price