AyumiGosu17

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***Yeah, I saw you driving today... :wink: I know the busy-weekend feeling - been trying to pack for New York between horse sales! :lol: And I got me a Tony ...

I was thinking the same thing! I'm going to finish this one and then try to find another story. I'm thinking about Cain and Abel as my next project...what do ...

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The squads pressed on through the course of the day, only stopping every now and then to eat, drink, and take necessary breaks... Ayumi and Emi spent most of their ...

SCENE ONE (Lights come up on the forestage; many sheep and goats are grazing peacefully. More lights come up on backstage left, revealing a campsite. Two shepherds sit at a ...

Setting Carmel, in the land of Maon, outside Jerusalem Pre-Reading Derived from 1 Samuel 25. King Samuel of Jerusalem has died; his son, David, has taken the throne and now ...

***Don't you mean D-rank missions? You said A-rank... :lol: But how I'd love THAT! :lol: *** Ayumi smiled, also glancing at the Genin. "Tsunade. I knew it would happen, with ...

The past two weeks had been long...and testy. When they weren't walking dogs, helping old ladies with groceries and gardens, or picking up trash at the school, they were training. ...

Hmm. Interesting. Now, I'm not much as Starwars fanatic, but this intrigues me, makes me itch for more. I like the descriptions and the suspense. It really snared my attention. ...

Hey, I finally finished reading. Yeah, weariness caught me halfway through last night... :lol: Anyway, now to critique! I do like your story's plot. It's a bit like Ghost Whisperer ...

***I guess I'm willing to post in this. But I'm going to have to reread the entire thread in order to remember stuff.***

Ayumi chuckled as she sat down beside Emi, gesturing for the Genin to order something. Chiro and Taiki caught each other's gazes and immediately buried their noses in the menus, ...

Don't be disheartened! It's very good, despite your block. I like how you depict all the different characteristics of each decade. This is very fabulously written! I can't find much ...

They were silent for a while; the Genin seemed afraid to move or make a sound, probably because of Ayumi's temper... She sighed, and opened her mouth to speak - ...