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Ayumi (ah-YOO-me) tried not to swing as Emi shook her early in the morning. She was always a hard sleeper that was best woken from a distance... Emi was excited. ...

Name: Ayumi Gosu Age: 15 Appearance: Shoulder length blonde hair that is steadily turning red, blue/gray/green eyes, 5'7", slight build Disposition: kind and caring unless annoyed, bad/short temper an

Beautiful! Absolutely fantastic!

Yay! Very nice! It's just you need to put a space between the eleventh and twelfth (sp?) paragraphs...Other than that...WONDERFUL!!!

This is the old version. The new version is much more accurate and understandable. It is titled "Ayumi." CHPATER 4 ENCOUNTERS Ayumi liked being back in the desert; it was ...

This is the old version. The new version is much more accurate and understandable. It is titled "Ayumi." CHAPTER 3 AFFECTIONS “Where’s Itachi?” Ayumi asked one morning a few days ...

This is the old version. The new version is much more accurate and understandable. It is titled "Ayumi." CHAPTER 2 THE LAST GOSU “Now, tell me again: how’d you manage ...

Very nice except for a couple of (as usual :P) mistakes. I like this one more!

This is the old version. The new version is much more accurate and understandable. It is titled "Ayumi." CHAPTER ONE LIFE OF A NINJA The wind was wickedly fierce; it ...

Prologue The wind tore at his back, whipping through his brown locks. With a single hand, he brushed the thick bangs from his eyes. He stared out over the landscape, ...