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Name – Karana Gender - Female Eyes – Gray Green Hair - Golden Blonde Weapons – short sword on right hip, bow on back, knives tucked into belt and boots ...

Very interesting, Timeam but I must say, you jump around a lot. I was confused about the events, places, and people most of the time. Try to neaten that up ...

((Finally! Part 3 of Chapter 5 - Return to the Leaves)) “We’ll have to be careful, though. Shukaku is powerful, as expected, but part of his power flows through the ...

This is the old version. The new version is much more accurate and understandable. It is titled "Ayumi. " ((This is Part 2 of Chapter 5 - Return to the ...

Anna giggled. "You'd best behave, then," she joked. "You've no idea how insane he was about finding you! And then you were bitten, to make it worse ." Gared and ...

Anna was losing patience. What was this girl hiding? Why wouldn't she mention her name? "I don't know who you are, which doesn't mean I can trust you," she spoke ...

Anna stood in place, still clutching the blood-dripping knife in her right hand. "I'm sorry it had to happen, too, Clara," she whispered to the wind. Footsteps nearby drew her ...

I'm not that into spacecraft and Star Wars, but it did catch my attention. Wonderful writing!

"Just what we need. Ninja tracking us," Ayumi growled, turning away. She had to get away, get her own space. She was still too angry to maintain control of herself. ...

(Shit! I do remember! God damn it, how could I be so stupid!) Anna bit her tongue, lurching away from Clara, spinning around as she drew her silver knife from ...

Anna hissed, angrier than she had ever felt herself before. "Because I'm not like you," she twisted, ramming her elbow into Clara's ribs, breaking at least one. Anna pulled away ...

Uh...wait I remember now. It's that dude from before, who slapped Tea. Yeah... Very nice. Keep it up.

Yeah, you've definately edited! I noticed some changes in chapter one, but then, I hadn't read it in ages! Haha! There were a few errors, like leaving out a letter ...

Anna couldn't stop Gared. He dove for Elizabeth as she fell to the floor. "Elizabeth!" was all he could say, holding her. Anna glared at Clara. "Well, look who it ...

(((Okay, author13 and I can't be the only ones posting, people! Wake up!)))