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Karana Dusk was falling. Sinarel swooped, carrying me, down to the open field in front of the local bar. Not that I normally drank, but I was in a foul ...

Drake I followed her into the room, moving beside her as she returned to a window. "I'm glad you're awake," I told her, meaning it. "How do you feel?"

Name: Audra Age: 16 Gang: Punkers Race: a mix of European (goes by white) Appearance: 5'8", very slender but with obvious curves, blonde hair, blue-grey eyes, generally dresses in dark ...

Question, TN. What's Alana's favorite scent? Drake I came along the hallway, moving towards the infirmary. Was Alana still there? But, even more important: why was I so concerned about ...

Can someone bring me in?

Name: Karana (kuh-RAH-nuh), female Age: 17 Race: elf Appearance: 5'8", slender with curves and muscle, long blonde hair, blue eyes Personality: Pretty calm and aristocratic at times, but can be ...

Audra A good reason. "Memories are good if they're the right ones," I added. Again, memories. Ah, but hell! Everyone had bad memories! I had to learn to let go...even ...

Lucan Wonderful mess we were in. First, a bad night at work, then a bar fight, and now jail time. Wonder bit of ... yeah. I sighed as I watch ...

Audra He always did that. He always dissolved me from the inside out, leaving me trembling, excited, and happy. I sighed as I pulled on my tennis shoes, stuck my ...

Drake I walked along the street. My shoulder was still sore, but it wasn't bleeding. Thank goodness. But Alana... Her blood was all over me. I had not even bothered ...

*I guess I will. I haven't posted in a while... Karana and Ilum exchanged glances, and Karana shook her head. What was Izuki thinking? "Think she likes her old job?" ...

Lucan I stepped into the living room and saw Trinity at the window. Deep in thought. "Did you have a good night?" I asked, making her jump. She hadn't heard ...

Hmm...well, this prologue has done its job. You've gotten my attention! Not too bad! Wonderful grammar, nice transitions, and a good bit of supsense. I'm definately reading the rest of ...

Lucan I stopped at the door and listened as Trinity moved. I heard her lean against the wall and slide along it. I heard her sit on the floor. I ...

Lucan I nodded. "That's perfect. Gives us time to sleep, prepare, and organize. Now, I'm getting some rest." I stood and stalked out of the room, heading for one of ...