AyumiGosu17

I love these topics. Just don't leave me behind, please. I can get caught up with homework a lot... Name: Audra Age: 17 Gender: female Appearance: 5'8, blonde hair that ...

**Aww, sweet tattoo! Jake "Good," I said as I turned to leave. "Then you should be able to take over as lookout." I smiled and kissed her on the cheek. ...

Drake I came up to the bleeding person left laying in the streets. Knife wounds to his chest and abdomen had left him bleeding to death. His eyes were partially ...

Karana I sat in the shadows, watching them in silence. At least they were happy, they had each other... Stop it! You DO have Kai, but we have chosen to ...

Karana and Ilum were caught off guard by the quaking, and it threw them from their feet for a moment. And that was all it took. The chimera lunged at ...

Chapter One The wind was fierce, a constant and cold pressure buffeting the sails of the vessel. Timbers groaned against the torrent of waves against the hull, and ropes flailed ...

Okay, I'm gonna talk to you a little bit. There's nothing too seriously wrong with this, but maybe try the following tips. Parallelism. Keep your verbs in the whole post ...

Drake I was moving slower than I liked, still a little weak from my encounter the night before... Damn it. This was taking too long. I would never find anyone ...

Jake A tattoo. She was hiding a tattoo. Why? I decided not to ask, but instead said, "Sleep well?"

**I'm sure. That would be funny if you wrote "Kai" instead of "Luke." XD** When two chimeras broke from the brush, they split up. Ilum and Karana took on one ...

Audra I snickered as I heard more and more ridiculous assumptions about the burned courtyard. Kai did well to conceal his own humor. If only they knew the truth. It ...

**Good God, people haven't touched this in, what, two weeks??? Damn!! Okay, TN, let's get this started back up, and recruit a little if we must. lol** Drake Dusk finally ...

Jake I nodded, standing back up. "It's fine. You had a long day." I raised my voice as men clambered on deck and started their work. "Got open water! All's ...

Karana I stared at Draco. This couldn't be right. Kai felt so strongly about me? It was hard to believe! But...I did believe him. I nodded, closing my eyes as ...

Karana smiled as she and Ilum mounted their steeds, coming up alongside Luke and Raven. Karana held a hand out to Izuki, who took it and squeezed into the space ...