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Stanton I chuckled, wrapping my arms around her waist, pulling her closer. My lips claimed hers, teasing her passionately. I felt her tremble against me, touching my jaw with her ...

Mike I shrugged and put a random one in. Turned out to be Linkin Park, one of my personal favorites. I felt like a complete idiot trying not to jam ...

Stanton I gaped at Brian, not expecting what he had just done. I quickly concealed my shock, though, and turned back to Serena. "Just getting to know each other better," ...

**I'm feeling a little better now. Hmmm... let's see... ** Drake I nodded. I could live with that. If he didn't want to tell me the full details now, that ...

Not bad at all! A couple of simple errors, like misplaced semicolons and misspelled words, but it's fixable. Personally, I'd like to know why Petra is the main character. Describe ...

Mike After we got dry and changed into regular clothes, I took her on a small walk. My car was parked on the beach's lot, where I'd left it the ...

**I probably won't post any today. I was in a wreck last night...and now I have serious whiplash... ugh...**

**Oh my God, I am hurting... Gosh, this kills!** Stanton I shook my head. This was getting us nowhere. And I was getting a headache again. "Let's talk about it ...

**Yeah, I'm just gonna post tomorrow, unless I have serious whiplash. Later!**

Ilum relaxed beneath Karana's touch, her hands working his shoulders and back gently as she hushed him. The comfort she offered was so sincere, so heartfelt, he knew she meant ...

Mike I felt her tense against me. I had her pinned to the ground, my body against hers. Could she feel how hot I had gotten? Perhaps. I could certainly ...

Stanton I nodded. "But that's the point. If what you say is true, that without me she's basically emo... Do you realize how difficult it is to be around someone ...

**Just think on it, organize it a bit, and it should be fine, Rory. I like the sound of it anyway!** Tegan I pulled her closer, wanting to crush her ...

**I can make his GF. You're controlling three, I'm controlling two. It's only fair.** Stanton I looked at the girl, asleep in my arms. I was quiet for a long ...

Tegan I swallowed, hard. Damn. She had cornered me... "I was afraid," I admitted softly, still not looking at her. "I was afraid for you , that something might have ...